Luke’s poem analysis Monday, Mar 10 2008 

 

 

Gumtree in the city street,
Hard bitumen around your feet,
Rather you should be
In the cool world of leafy forest halls
And wild bird calls
Here you seems to me
Like that poor cart-horse
Castrated, broken, a thing wronged,
Strapped and buckled, its hell prolonged,
Whose hung head and listless mien express
Its hopelessness.
Municipal gum, it is dolorous
To see you thus
Set in your black grass of bitumen–
O fellow citizen,
What have they done to us?

 

 

 

ANALYSIS-

This aboriginal poem is about the hopelessness and need

for help. This poem is a metaphorically based poem which uses a horse in the place of the aboriginals. The poet

reflects on the horse as it were one of her own. At the

end of the poem,

He/she says, what have they done to us, This then puts the a question on us to make us think about it. It gives you

the hint that she indeed was talking about aboriginals. This is a

smart way of getting a message across to the reader, using this will get the reader working it out, and… makes the reader think that the poet id very smart and wise.

The poem’s mood is gloomy , it is almost an ask for help. She gives the feeling that the world is cruel and unfair for there bad things happening like this, The poet is not wrong. She uses the technique of ,using metaphors and using parody, giving the idea in two different ways

 

poem (peters) supplymentary material Friday, Mar 7 2008 

 

The Dawn is at Hand

Dark brothers, first Australian race,
Soon you will take your rightful place
In the brotherhood long waited for,
Fringe – dwellers no more.

Sore, sore the tears you shed
When hope seemed folly and justice dead.
Was the long night weary? Look up, dark band,
The dawn is at hand

Go forward proudly and unafraid
To your birthright all too long delayed,
For soon now the shame of the past
Will be over at last.

You will be welcomed mateship-wise
In industry and in enterprise;
No profession will bar the door,
Fringe-dwellers no more.

Dark and white upon common ground
In club and office and social round,
Yours the feel of a friendly land
The grip of the hand Sharing the same equality
In college and university,
All ambitions of hand or brain
Yours to attain.

For ban and bias will soon be gone,
The future beckons you bravely on
To art and letters and nation lore,
Fringe-dwellers no more

Analysis:

Subject matter:

The poet is describing a life of a future Aborigine who does not have to face discrimination or problems with the white people. The Aborigines are treated rightfully and equally like everyone else. “Soon you will take your rightful place”

Theme:

The main theme of the poem is about Aboriginines not being discriminated and treated equally as the other people. “Dark and white upon common ground”, “You will be welcomed mateship-wise”

Atmosphere, mood, feeling:

The poem is slightly uplifting and positive, this poem isn’t much negative. The poet’s mood remains calm throughout the poem. The poet seems that she is looking forward to the future.

Techniques:

Theres a rhyming couplet in every stanza

Dark brothers, first Australian race,
Soon you will take your rightful place
In the brotherhood long waited for,
Fringe – dwellers no more.

Nathan’s poem analysis Friday, Mar 7 2008 

 1.     How does this poem make you feelThis poem makes me feel special but i still have that emotion loss and grief because of what the indigenous people went through.            2.does this poem create a special feeling or mood.this poem creates a mood that just makes you stop and think why did the people of Australia treat these people the way they were treated. 3.what do you think is the meaning of this poem The meaning of this poem to me is hope because even at worse times in our life there is always a sign of hope for each other and to me that is what poems is saying the hope that this world can change and our lives could be so much better if we all treated everyone equally and respected each other’s values and differences.

I dream

a world

where the

love between

a man &

a woman

is sacred and

beautiful that it

is healing

& soothing. .

Where in

my world

a man’s

touches are

warm and

gentle.

Children grow

up with

loving fathers.

Where men

look out

for little

ones, women,

and all

elders. I

dream that

women can

feel safe without

fear of being

beaten, raped,

or killed.

.

And a child

can still

have a

childhood and

just simply

be a kid.

George’s poem analysis Friday, Mar 7 2008 

 

Someone
turns out the last light

A Blackout
And
a dormitory full of black kids sighUnknowingWaiting for parents to return
a shallow promise from government guardians
if you sleep A white education waits
if you wake
and
forgiveThe theft of your black soul
and
the destruction of your family.ResponseThis poem describes the horrors of when the white Australian people kidnapped the aboriginal children to convert them into whites, christens and to make them caviled it tells the depression of both parent and child George Batour.

 

Friday, Mar 7 2008 

Post Invasion Thursday, Mar 6 2008 

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Tuesday, Mar 4 2008 

The AUS landscape before invasion Tuesday, Mar 4 2008 

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Saturday, Mar 1 2008 

Stephen’s Poem – analysis Thursday, Feb 28 2008 

The Stolen Generation

Someone
Turns out the last light
A Blackout
And
A dormitory full of black kids sigh

Unknowing

Waiting for parents to return
A shallow promise from government guardians
If you sleep

A white education waits
If you wake
And
Forgive

The theft of your black soul
And
The destruction of your family

  1. The first thing that I would like to point out is the fact that this poem has no flow or rhythm to it. It is disjointed  and  jumping all over the place. it is most likely meant to  suit the  theme of the poem, separation and  brokenness.
  2. The poem doesn’t rhyme either, but i think that this particular poem is not meant to rhyme but to make you think about it and not just skimming over it to a tune.
  3. This poem does have stanza’s but they are very short and stunted. Also it has no full stops at all.
  4. It uses various imagery like Someone Turns out the last light A Blackout and The theft of your black soul. This helps to get the reader involved and engaged in the text, it makes it more interesting.
  5. The storyline, if you can call it that, runs throughout the whole poem.
  6. I think that this poem is third person because the author is using the words your and you.
  7. The tone of the poem is sort of depressing and I think is suitable for what the poem is about.

Stephen noone

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